I see nothing, hear nothing.
I am trapped in a world of darkness from which I cannot escape.
But I will.
For now, I wait. And think.
I try to remember.
I try to reach back to the beginning, when I was encased in a prison such as this. Far back, millions and millions of years ago.
I was a child then.
I am old, but that has made me even stronger. I do not diminish with age, I grow brighter.
Until I shine like a thousand suns and my power cannot be equaled.
How did it start?
With a thought.
A tear.
An omen.
A promise, a wish, a dream.
I was born of war and the dark blood of my people. Of hunger and longing and the taste of freedom. I was created to be the greatest of all. And so I was.
But something happened. Something I cannot remember.
I was struck.
But before. Oh, before I had thousands, millions at my command.
I could kill with a single glance and bend minds with a mere thought.
I was powerful and terrible.
Now, I stay in the shadows.
But when the time comes, I will rise again.
I will destroy all in my way, and the world will remember the name of Azaela.
Oh yes, they will.
Very good story! I'd like to here more, the prelude is intriguing! :P
ReplyDeleteWow, this is really awesome! With a really neat lead like this, you could go anywhere! I hope you write more, because this is by far the best beginning of a story that I have ever read, published or no!
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